The music went with the poem, and brought out the message in it. I think the picture of the dragon was shown too much, so maybe you could have used different ones. You've done a great job of the poem, despite the fact it being 6minutes, and I think both the pictures and the music go with the ballad.
I think this would have been very good, if only you would have used a different song. the music distracted me from the poem and I couldn't really focus on the words in the poem. Everything else was good, but you should have used a song without such a distracting tune.
I think that the music distracted me from the actual poem. I think that it was a little to long and I couldn't really tell what the message was. I think it was a good try.
The music went with the poem, and brought out the message in it. I think the picture of the dragon was shown too much, so maybe you could have used different ones. You've done a great job of the poem, despite the fact it being 6minutes, and I think both the pictures and the music go with the ballad.
ReplyDeleteI think this would have been very good, if only you would have used a different song. the music distracted me from the poem and I couldn't really focus on the words in the poem. Everything else was good, but you should have used a song without such a distracting tune.
ReplyDeleteI think that the music distracted me from the actual poem. I think that it was a little to long and I couldn't really tell what the message was. I think it was a good try.
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